Commentary

This comic contains Tedd’s first declaration of something being blasphemy, and it will not be his last.

I actually drew a separate version of this goo hunting sequence back when I was still in high school. I’ve lost track of the originals, so I’m not sure how much this version deviates, but I’m pretty sure the nets were always there. I assume “splip”, “splort”, and “sploot” were exclusive to this HD special limited edition version of those comics (and hey, now with DVD-style commentary!).

If I talked about every art thing I would do differently in these older comics, I would never stop typing, but I’m pretty sure that “swoosh” is something I’d do differently. I mean, it sorta works, but the direction it asks the reader’s eyes to go in is something of a circle. Elliot’s dialogue to “swoosh” to “sploot splat”, and then back to Elliot’s dialogue. One could read that one panel forever if they allowed themselves to do so.

Commentary added August 5th, 2014

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