- Ellen dream about Sirleck and Magus talking

- (Next page) Making clear Ellen's been waiting for Pandora's return

Mr. Dunkel, on his phone: "Hello, Edward, what can I do for you? I see. If it would help, Grace and Tedd can stay here tonight. What's that? The reincarnation of an ancient immortal who slew all but a handful of vampires throughout the world, and prior to that attempted to plunge society into magical chaos? Of course she's welcome!

Space is a bit of a concern, but... She has a portable room that can be put nearly anywhere? Excellent! We shall bake brownies in her honor!"

Part of me thinks Elliot should have handled himself better in panel two, focusing on Tedd's feelings more than his own desire to punch whoever had upset Tedd. Another part of me, however, wanted to ever-so-cleverly re-establish this side of Elliot, and how protective he is of Tedd.

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Alright, what ACTUALLY won out was my desire to draw angry Elliot. He wears it so well!

Announcement regarding a delay that happened:

Next story page Friday due to a blunderous writing blunder of blunderous proportions, the blunderosity so extreme as to threaten the very fabric of reality itself.

Which is to say I’m now rewriting a whole lot to avoid a glaring continuity error I was about to unwittingly introduce. I will explain the error in detail in a future commentary, but it may be a while as explaining it would be a spoiler unto itself.

This is the part where I contemplate keeping a journal of all the many details about absolutely everything. I don't have such a thing for the comic, usually just easily remembering the important things and referring back to old comics as necessary.

As today demonstrates, however, that isn't always reliable. I apologize for this blunderous blunder.

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- Saturday EGSNP