- Edward talking about that one foolish immortal
There's one more page (Wednesday) in this part, and then a short break before part 2. I'm still deciding how long I'll need.
So... Much... Editing...
I don't think I should be too specific, as that could be unleash inadvertent spoilers, but I went back and forth on many specific details on this page.
One thing I decided I wanted to emphasize, however, was "the spirit of things", which I consider an important idea going forward in regard to magic. I really enjoying magic having logic that's consistent, but weird, and the spirit of what a magic spell / enchantment / etc. is doing mattering fits into that well.
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