Commentary
This is the danger of procrastinating.
Not that I'd know anything about procrastinating.
Future Edit: Some people initially mistook the teacher for Mr. Verres, and yeah, I can see the resemblance. I didn't want to completely change him, but I made two subtle changes to make him less-Edwardy.
Simply lighter eyebrows and more of a sideburn. Still a resemblance, but should reduce "is Edward teaching?" theories.
EDIT EDIT: Wait, three changes. Forgot I modified the glasses a little.
And now back to the original commentary.
Something I enjoy about Diane is that she's more selfish than most of the main characters. That's mostly not a positive trait, but it is fun to write.
Granted, "more selfish than most of the main characters" isn't saying much. "Hey, you're more selfish than that guy who has a problem with being too selfless! HOW DARE"
Now that I think on it, Diane levels of selfishness are probably healthier than Elliot levels of selflessness. Huh.
--
