Commentary

 NOOOOOOO I REFUSE TO ACKNOWLEDGE--Wait a minute.

Panel two. Are those... Those are adequately rendered abs. I mean, it's not a six pack, but it gives an impression of the presences of abdominal muscles befitting a simplified style such as my own. That's something I've been struggling with in current comics.

Granted, I don't think quite as I've done here would work, but it's in the ballpark. I have the magic of line width variation these days. If done subtly enough... Yes... it could work...

Wow. It's weird that this comic is only one panel with no text of girl Elliot in a bikini, but it might have actually been super helpful. How about that?

Commentary added October 6, 2014

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