Commentary

Great. Now I have Shine by Merideth Brooks stuck in my head. Again.

Susan Service

This EGS:NP was tricky to write, because it's very easy to cross into "for the audience" behavior Vs. "for the Susan" behavior, and the idea here is to have Susan doing whatever for herself, and everyone else getting caught in symbiotic crossfire.

If she veers out of character during this sequence, it goes from symbiotic to parasitic. As none of us wish to be compared to mosquitoes (probably?), I must tread carefully.

Comfortable And Easy To Wear

I have been told I made the right choice with Susan's bra, so FINAL FANTASY VICTORY MUSIC!

Though I might have made it look too much like a sports bra Vs simply a general wire free bra? I think what happened is I didn't want to make the bra too low cut, but that resulted in it looking more sporty? I am obviously not an expert, but that's my understanding of what I did.

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