Commentary

 I couldn't help but make Nanase's eyes a little too suggestive in panel two. If it helps, imagine she was mid-blink. Or imagine she was actually weirdly flirting. I dunno. Whatever makes the most sense to you.

If Susan seems taller than you remember her being in the previous comic, then you probably saw the original before I uploaded an edited version. I guess I'm basically talking about this in two commentaries now, but I somehow accidentally made Susan (the real Susan, on the right) about two inches or so shorter than she should be in the last panel.

I felt this was important enough to fix, and why I felt that way is probably obvious with this comic. A slight height difference would not do here, darn it.

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