Comic for Friday, May 18, 2018

Commentary

Posted May 18, 2018 at 12:00 am

- Kid Nanase

- Lucy moment #1
- Lucy moment #2

This comic didn't need to include Lucy and her bunny, but I wasn't happy with how I left things with Lucy. The cheerleader outfit wasn't that flattering on Lucy, the final focus was on her being a bit cheerleadery, and I just wanted to go back to those two with a bit more transformation having happened, and with them having a bit of fun with it, too.

(EDIT: I prefer leaving it open to interpretation, but enough people have asked: Lucy is commenting on how shrunk her bunny friend (BF) is, then asking about shrinking her BF more. A literal interpretation would be "50%... 25%?".)

I wasn't originally going to imply that they accompanied Rhoda into the video store, but that's where Nanase comes in.

Nanase's figure and height is closer to what would be normal to Rhoda in that last panel, but Rhoda herself is taller than normal, so there's not really a good frame of reference. As such, I decided the rows of video boxes could help out a bit.

That said, I'll see about clarifying it further next comic, which should be easy because Nanase has to convey that she's still not back to normal to Rhoda, and the visual for that should make it obvious.

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