Commentary

This is the part where I preemptively say "spoilers" in response to any and all questions regarding why Liz is telling Ashley to avoid the book store.

That "meanwhile" is absolutely absurd, but I appreciate it for that, and it helped me keep all the other panels the sizes I wanted.

I sort of wanted Elliot to not have the shirt on yet and hold it up in the last panel, but it sort of messed with the tone of the previous panel, and it didn't really make much sense, either.

EGS:NP

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